Thursday 11 June 2020

The Lighthouse Walk

The Lighthouse Walk
Crash,crash,crash as the waves hit against the yellow smooth sand. We were walking to a lighthouse
at the end of the beach, we had to have a buddy so I chose Hunter. I am so excited because there are
rock pools, cool rocks, crystals and we get to walk over rocks. I am most excited about the cool rocks
and crystals. When we started walking me and Hunter didn't have the idea of collecting crystals,so it was
boring.When we got to the rock pools me and Hunter finally had the idea of collecting crystals so we
started. 


But there was one problem as we were getting closer to the big non crystal grey rocks there were no
crystals so we just had fun jumping from rock to rock. After like 20 minutes we finally saw the lighthouse.
It was big, rusty and with plants growing out of the tops and sides. As we were looking at the lighthouse
Jaxon cawt a crab with his hands it was so big, then after a while he saw an octopus it was under a big
rock. Then he said “Look at the octopus under the rock!” and he tried to grab it but it swam under the
rock and everyone crowded him. After that excitement we had to sing a song, after that we went back
to school.
THE END!!! 

          

1 comment:

  1. wow Harry I don't know what to say but I'd do swosh instead of crash but other than that it's cool and good

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